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Model: Victoria Levina

Like an angel :)
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:star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Vision
:star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

the first thing I see as I look at this is how much the area behind the model is blown out. I find this to be very distracting.it also looks as though it has been placed there post process. in the case of doing a non themed portrait I feel it best to not do much post process. just the basics such as exposure wb and such. as for the models pose I think this would be better if you had her look down to her right and not at the camera. the look she has now is more like hurry up lets get this done. it may also look as though she is saying in her face that she is not really focused on the shoot. good use of the rule of thirds though I wonder if this was cropped to make it as such. maybe having her bend both arms would not lead to the question as to weather you cut her off short or not.you also cut off the top of her head I would like to see this recomposed with the head in one piece and both arms in view